I love this! So good. The lucid imagery, earnest clarity, and magnificent symbolism of the water and the birds was phenomenally crafted and beautifully written. Of course I always cry at endings. Damn it I want the foxes and ducks to survive. Congratulations on publishing a new book! I can’t wait to hold an original edition in my hands. Thank you for sharing a part of your story with me. Peace.
Very fine work, Sean. Wouldn't have expected any different. I'm so glad to see it worked out! Powerhouse collection by powerhouses!
Thanks, Ken! I think any one of your bird stories would have fit in this collection beautifully.
Maybe. I do regret it. Just one of those things. That said, I'll be enjoying the hell out of this one!
So well written, Sean. I'm really hoping the ducks drown Lance.
Thanks you! You'll love the ending. ;)
I love this! So good. The lucid imagery, earnest clarity, and magnificent symbolism of the water and the birds was phenomenally crafted and beautifully written. Of course I always cry at endings. Damn it I want the foxes and ducks to survive. Congratulations on publishing a new book! I can’t wait to hold an original edition in my hands. Thank you for sharing a part of your story with me. Peace.
Thank you, Jessica! That means a lot to me. I'm the same way when it comes to animals. <3
Color me intrigued!
this scene is so fucking good
I would change a few things if I were to rewrite it now, but it's a fun time for sure. 7k words! 😳
Because I'm lazy, I may steal the bulk of this when I post my excerpt. 😅
That's not lazy, that's efficient! haha
You did such a great job! The post is perfection. Can't be improved. I'm also lazy, but it's truly perfect. 👌