Oh man, I love this so much! I love how subtle the weirdness is here. It sort of creeps in little by little, then ramps up quickly right there at the end. Perfection.
Wow, this was good weird. I like it. Had to google spider crabs, all I know is that coconut crab which tastes good. Looks creepy these crabs. But this fic kinda feels like a twilight zone episode
Ika, interestingly, I was reading Stolen kiss when I got the notification that you commented on my story. We must be on the same wavelength! I really enjoyed your poem/story.
Damn, I'm dying to get some more of this. I love that you leave so much to the imagination with the creature... but still manage to paint such a clear picture of it in my head. And the connection between the eyes and the peas changing colour is so damn cool. Love this!
do something called free writing. where let the birds out of the cage flapping yapping and tippy tapping. and I really found its helpful to automaton -- in order to come across the unexpected. and it gave me freedom to expose things I didnt even know were there, to create a way through well for me nonsense rhyme am closer to CS Lewis in some ways, still agve a way into speaking to them -- this is interesting you bring in the mysterious creature -- is it going kafka or the alien...
Cooked differently…I’m screaming inside! This was a subtle little infiltrator, and now it’s in my head. How am I supposed to sleep tonight?
It is unsettling haha
Kids are creepy to begin with. I love them, but they can be creepy.
Oh man, I love this so much! I love how subtle the weirdness is here. It sort of creeps in little by little, then ramps up quickly right there at the end. Perfection.
Thanks! You've inspired me to go back and look at some of my stranger tales for inspo. ❤️
I'd love to read them!
Wow, this was good weird. I like it. Had to google spider crabs, all I know is that coconut crab which tastes good. Looks creepy these crabs. But this fic kinda feels like a twilight zone episode
Ika, interestingly, I was reading Stolen kiss when I got the notification that you commented on my story. We must be on the same wavelength! I really enjoyed your poem/story.
Result of brain on sleep fasting. Thank you.
It was because I was creeped out by the obsessive stalker fans they had in South Korea. Don't want such around me for sure.
It's a really interesting topic. I need to write a horror poem for a contest. Maybe I should create something around that..
Also good luck on the contest!
Thank you!
If you search for it you will find creepy stories that will make most stalkers envious
Not the spider crab! There's a large one in our local museum and I've been scared of it since 1998.
They're wild looking. :scream:
I love this! Very creepy (but also funny in places), and you do a great job of maintaining the mystery!
Thank you, Bridget! <3
Damn, I'm dying to get some more of this. I love that you leave so much to the imagination with the creature... but still manage to paint such a clear picture of it in my head. And the connection between the eyes and the peas changing colour is so damn cool. Love this!
Thank you, Daniel! That means a lot to me. <3
That is so weird! And what!? The ending is killer, too. I hope this creature makes it into a longer story someday🤞
haha I love this reaction so much! Well, I guess now I need to bring the creature back. *whistles
Can’t wait for morning!
this is so scary! i want more crab monster.
Look under your bed tonight! ;)
Just ran to the bathroom to look in the mirror to make sure my eye color didn't change...
Fantastic as always. Love the "the Laura who cried switcher" vibe.
Thanks for reading, Will! :)
what an ending man
Thanks, Daisy!
do something called free writing. where let the birds out of the cage flapping yapping and tippy tapping. and I really found its helpful to automaton -- in order to come across the unexpected. and it gave me freedom to expose things I didnt even know were there, to create a way through well for me nonsense rhyme am closer to CS Lewis in some ways, still agve a way into speaking to them -- this is interesting you bring in the mysterious creature -- is it going kafka or the alien...