Wow, this was good weird. I like it. Had to google spider crabs, all I know is that coconut crab which tastes good. Looks creepy these crabs. But this fic kinda feels like a twilight zone episode
Damn, I'm dying to get some more of this. I love that you leave so much to the imagination with the creature... but still manage to paint such a clear picture of it in my head. And the connection between the eyes and the peas changing colour is so damn cool. Love this!
do something called free writing. where let the birds out of the cage flapping yapping and tippy tapping. and I really found its helpful to automaton -- in order to come across the unexpected. and it gave me freedom to expose things I didnt even know were there, to create a way through well for me nonsense rhyme am closer to CS Lewis in some ways, still agve a way into speaking to them -- this is interesting you bring in the mysterious creature -- is it going kafka or the alien...
Wow, this was good weird. I like it. Had to google spider crabs, all I know is that coconut crab which tastes good. Looks creepy these crabs. But this fic kinda feels like a twilight zone episode
Not the spider crab! There's a large one in our local museum and I've been scared of it since 1998.
I love this! Very creepy (but also funny in places), and you do a great job of maintaining the mystery!
Damn, I'm dying to get some more of this. I love that you leave so much to the imagination with the creature... but still manage to paint such a clear picture of it in my head. And the connection between the eyes and the peas changing colour is so damn cool. Love this!
That is so weird! And what!? The ending is killer, too. I hope this creature makes it into a longer story someday🤞
this is so scary! i want more crab monster.
Just ran to the bathroom to look in the mirror to make sure my eye color didn't change...
Fantastic as always. Love the "the Laura who cried switcher" vibe.
what an ending man
do something called free writing. where let the birds out of the cage flapping yapping and tippy tapping. and I really found its helpful to automaton -- in order to come across the unexpected. and it gave me freedom to expose things I didnt even know were there, to create a way through well for me nonsense rhyme am closer to CS Lewis in some ways, still agve a way into speaking to them -- this is interesting you bring in the mysterious creature -- is it going kafka or the alien...