Rinko

[Author Michele Bardsley]

Breaking my heart with your words. Thank you.

[Sean Thomas McDonnell]

❤️ Thank you!

[Tiffany S.]

Short and sadly sweet.

"...but at such a distance, how could the heart reach its mark?"

Loved this!

[Sean Thomas McDonnell]

I loved this line, too! Thanks for calling it out! ❤️

[Jimmy Gardner]

So lovely

[Sean Thomas McDonnell]

Thanks, Jimmy! ❤️ Hope you're doing well!

[Hanna Delaney]

Aw, Sean 💔 this was lovely.

[Sean Thomas McDonnell]

Thank you, Hanna. That means a lot to me!

[Will Boucher]

"For a moment, she bloomed." got me.

[Sean Thomas McDonnell]

❤️🌸

[William Pauley III]

Ah, that last line. Perfection. 👌

[Sean Thomas McDonnell]

❤️

[molly]

I especially love the parallel between the flowers and Rinko herself. And it was cool to add a "realistic" motif (flowers) into a scifi landscape!!

[Sean Thomas McDonnell]

Thanks! My favorite sci fi is organic. :)

[Annie Hendrix]

oooh I love this

[Sean Thomas McDonnell]

Thanks, Annie! I wrote it for a contest, then forgot to submit it! haha

[Keith Long]

Love the scifi idea of a flower that blooms based on emotion

[Sean Thomas McDonnell]

Thanks for reading, Keith! 🌸