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Great Collab - I love how things come together and then come undone. Very good format for your complimentary skills both. Now do one out at sea!

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watch out, you will absolutely inspire something

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I love this. But also, I do not want to go camping. Ever.

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Thanks, Michele! I don't want to go camping either! But mostly because I don't like bugs. haha

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The woods have all the nature. I don't even like going out into my backyard, Sean.

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not in the woods. no. and there aint even wolves or bears in england

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Great collaboration! Both characters and storylines were riveting. I knew they would converge, but never predicted how! Loved it!

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Damn, I was going to go hiking this weekend but I think I'll pass. I wa son the edge of the whole time. I knew someone was going to die but couldn't guess until the twist!

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You had a 50/50 shot! haha (although, we did consider death for all)

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Humans will always be the scariest creatures in the woods. Excellent story! Now you've got me in the Halloween spirit. 🎃

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When we first started out there was going to be a demon in the woods inciting them, but we decided humans didn't need that to be wild.

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demons already built in, arent they...

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Excellent choice. 👌

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Absolutely correct, though having said that I'm working on one with a potential but not 100% sure demon right now. Coming soon.

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I love demon stuff. My story Apple Snake has one (in a forest to boot).

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Reminds me of the old days hiking through the woods, just me, my pack and my trusty wakizashi.

Wonderful stuff, fellas! Excellent work. May I venture a guess that EJ did the Ken bits and Seany the Tori bits? Or is that not cricket?

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Thanks, Murph! We're both big fans and appreciate the compliment! I was Ken's puppeteer, EJ animated Tori. 💀

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How about getting that completely wrong then? Just goes to show... er, something.

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I am super intrigued by that!

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I like that you got that wrong. If I can be mistaken for EJ I know I must be doing something right. ❤️

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Finally got around to reading this 🤩 awesome stuff guys! The dual narrative was a lot of fun.

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Nothing like killing someone to bring your life into focus. Another on the edge of my seat thriller!

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Nothing scares me more than woods horror and I love nothing more than woods horror. 10/10, would read again while camping and scare the living shit out of myself.

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Yay! Thanks for the lovely comment! ❤️

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A great read for this time of year. As a lover of the woods and camping, I love how you’ve made me question about going back out there! At least for the moment.

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haha sorry we ruined camping for a moment. Appreciate you reading our story! ❤️

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These two as a team are seamless

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Thank you for these comments, Bette! It means a lot to us! ❤️

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maybe. Or maybe it’s because people want something big to happen–something to cut through the nothingness” Ken’s obsession and reason in one sentence

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She noticed the pristine beauty of the clearing for the first time. The soft white moon, the crunchy pine needles, the ancient trees that smelled like Christmas. BEAUTY IN HORROR!!!

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Great stuff y’all! Spooky!

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But what was Ken going to do!? Does Tori share this with the YMCA group? Loved this collab. Fun and terrifying stuff.

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hahaha Tori goes back to the camping debrief and she’s like “I killed a guy, how was yalls trip?”

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I read this story and loved it. I had intended to read half and get back to my own writing. NO WAY! I had to finish it. READ IT, you'll be happy and satisfied.

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