They praise themselves, and that vanity—that self-lust—is the only distraction I need to do what it is I’ve come all this way to do.
The stars in the sky are a mirror to them.
“Look at my breath,” I say. “Watch it twirl and become part of the night.”
But they can’t hear me because I am nothingness; they only entertain reflection.
“Look at my breath,” I say again. “Watch it twirl—watch it become the stars.”
They take out their phones and scroll, searching for themselves, and they find it: they see the lust for meaning and mistake it for purpose.
“I breathe, and the stars expand. I breathe, and the mirror fogs.”
Their phones are dark. Their art is obsolete. Their plight was insignificant.
“I breathe, and the stars dim—I breathe, and the stars sleep.”
They scream; they love the sound of their own voices.
Your prose is poetry like similar to my own. I love it!
Painful metaphoric story told as beautifully as a poem. Just remember, kiddo, you're the real one!!