I DID finish your story and, as a matter of fact, read it over about three times. I love the way you personify the unique protagonist, and I was very happy that he found an appreciative home at last. Reading your story makes me want to write something about children's books that get banned and how 'they' feel about it. We'll see.
Good point! It's a little abrupt. I typically only use the dividing line at the end of my stories, but I can see how that might not be enough to signal the end.
Not me almost tearing up at the book finding a new home, damn I’m soft nowadays
<3 awww
I DID finish your story and, as a matter of fact, read it over about three times. I love the way you personify the unique protagonist, and I was very happy that he found an appreciative home at last. Reading your story makes me want to write something about children's books that get banned and how 'they' feel about it. We'll see.
You totally should! That's an interesting idea. <3
Masterful job of giving life to an inanimate object.
May I suggest a symbol or some other way to let us know the story ends ?
The "Heya Friends!" broke the spell of a story I would have lingered with.
I just use 3 asterisks.
I moved the comment button up. Appreciate the feedback!
That should work. Hope it helps garner more comments too
Good point! It's a little abrupt. I typically only use the dividing line at the end of my stories, but I can see how that might not be enough to signal the end.
Thanks for the kind words, Jimmy Doom!
Thanks for the cool story