Oh goodness, I think I need to go back and read through this more slowly to savor it! I flew through it and loved it even as I dreaded the ending! Wonderful work, Sean!
This one was just oozing dread. So atmospheric with that underlying tension that pulls you straight through to the end. But then you always manage that tenderness too. Such a beautiful balance you strike. Well done!
In addition to the many things I loved about this story, the scene with the deacons singing up the hill and closing with a hum was crystal clear and creepy at. Loved it!
Oh, this is so disturbing. I love it! The narrator opening the door in Abigail’s Promise and then lying to the Pastor about it is such perfect childhood behavior. Mama’s behavior is more complicated, a deep well. I will be thinking about this story for a long time.
Oooh! What a terrific story. The name Abigale's Promise was perfect and set a tone that was outstandingly supported by the story of the Narrator, his parents and....Bernard. There is so much to unpack here and so much to imagine and then project, as it should be with any story. It reminded me a little of two books that Thomas Tryon wrote a long time ago. One was called "The Other," that was a runawat best seller and the other, also a best seller, was "Harvest Home." Both were made into films. Each had the feeling of loss, sacrifice, and ancient rituals. I'm not going to forget your story for a very, very long time.
Oh goodness, I think I need to go back and read through this more slowly to savor it! I flew through it and loved it even as I dreaded the ending! Wonderful work, Sean!
Thank you, Bridget! I'm glad you liked it! ❤️❤️❤️
Same!
couldn't look away as I read it...so captivating
❤️ Thanks, Will!
This one was just oozing dread. So atmospheric with that underlying tension that pulls you straight through to the end. But then you always manage that tenderness too. Such a beautiful balance you strike. Well done!
Thanks, Garen! We should do another group meeting sometime soon!
Yes, for sure!
Invisible author. As it should be. So good.
Thank you! 🙏
Why is it so impossible not to open the door? Wonderfully done.
When we’re not supposed to look at something, we gotta take a peek! Thank you!
This is excellent — such an uneasy story, start to sudden stop
Thank you, Keith! Always an honor to have you check out one of my stories.
Pfft, just lil ole me. Thanks lol
In addition to the many things I loved about this story, the scene with the deacons singing up the hill and closing with a hum was crystal clear and creepy at. Loved it!
So glad you liked that part! ❤️
Oh, this is so disturbing. I love it! The narrator opening the door in Abigail’s Promise and then lying to the Pastor about it is such perfect childhood behavior. Mama’s behavior is more complicated, a deep well. I will be thinking about this story for a long time.
Yes! Mamma! She did what she felt like she had to. I feel the most for her.
Perfect. This may be my new favorite McD story.
Whoa! Thanks, homie! ❤️
Oooh! What a terrific story. The name Abigale's Promise was perfect and set a tone that was outstandingly supported by the story of the Narrator, his parents and....Bernard. There is so much to unpack here and so much to imagine and then project, as it should be with any story. It reminded me a little of two books that Thomas Tryon wrote a long time ago. One was called "The Other," that was a runawat best seller and the other, also a best seller, was "Harvest Home." Both were made into films. Each had the feeling of loss, sacrifice, and ancient rituals. I'm not going to forget your story for a very, very long time.
Thanks, Sandy! ❤️
I read Harvest Home not long ago! I think a bit after I wrote this one. Possibly during. I'll have to check out The Other!
It truly is a wonderful story. I remember the exciting moment with the Writers Guild where I knew you had a special voice and vision. I
I'd honestly be nothing without you, Sandy. You helped me kick off this journey.
Awww :)
rituals and religeon...a heady mix. you can smell the rot coming.
always a pleasure Sean!!
Thank you, Nick! A pleasure to have you read my stories. ❤️
This is a disquieting TBAR story (that baby aint right) -dreadfully dreadfilled.
TBAR! I love that. haha
Thank you, homie!
it’s an adaptation from something my sister coined long ago—TKAR - that kid ain’t right. She was referring to me as a child of course.
Naturally. haha
Was looking forward to this.
Nice work Sean!
Thank you, Mike! I appreciate that!